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(Beach day Starring Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie pie)

(The two mares were on their way to the beach. Pinkie pie and Twilight were carrying camping equiptment)

Pinkie pie: Come on,Twilight. Dont be such a slowpoke

Twilight: Alright Pinkie,I'm coming already. All these things on my back are slowing me down

(The mares have arrived to the beach near from ponyville. They see that everypony was setting up camp,ready for beach overnight day)

Pinkie pie: Were here,come on,lets go find us a spot

Twilight: Wait Pinkie pie,hold up

(The two of them walks to the camp site,looking for a spot)

Pinkie pie: Hmmmm,lets see. Where can we set up camp? (She finds a spot) This one

(They go to their spot to set up their tent. Twilight puts all the stuff down)

Twilight: Finally,My back was kill me,picking up all those stuff. Come on,lets set up camp

(The two mares sets up the tents. Twilight uses her magic to fix it up while Pinkie pie sets up the blankets inside. The tent has now been set up)

Twilight: There we go,everythings now complete

Pinkie pie: WOOOHOOO!

(Pinkie pie goes inside the tent)

Twilight: Hey wait for me

(Twilight gets in the tent as well. The both of them playfully wresles each other rigth before cuddling in each others arms)

Pinkie pie: Heh heh heh heh

Twilight: Ha ha ha.....Thanks for taking me here,I could use a day off from work

Pinkie pie: Of course silly,I wasnt gonna let my Twilight get stressed out over some silly scroll (She nuzzles her) I'm glad that my "Special massage" helped you relax

Twilight: (Blushes) Oh it did more than that,alright

Pinkie pie: (Giggle)

(Pinkie pie kisses Twilight passionatly and sweet,letting off pleasurable moans. As they kiss,Pinkie pie strokes Twilights mane and Twilight rubs Pinkies soft and sexy fank)

Pinkie pie: Oh Twilight,you such a good kisser

Twilight: So are you,my pink sweet cake

Pinkie pie: (Giggle)

(The two mares continued the kissing. A few hours later,they are walking on the beach)

Pinkie pie: So what do you wanna do here? We have the entire day to ourselves

Twilight: I don't know,There's so much to do here. I guess we could...

Pinkie pie: TAG! Your it!

Twilight: Hey!

(Twilight playfully goes after Pinkie pie who has just tagged her. Twilight catches up to Pinkie pie and in a second,she tags her)

Twilight: TAG! Ha ha ha,Who's the fastest filly ever! Oh my,I sounded like Rainbow dash there for a minute

(Pinkie pie looks at Twilight with lust)

Twilight: Pinkie pie,Why are you looking at me like that?

(As Pinkie goes closer to her,Twilight starts to run from her)

Twilight: Oh no you don't,Pinkie

Pinkie pie: Whats wrong,Twilight? Why you running. I'm gonna catch you anyway

(Twilight hids under a giant rock)

Twilight: (Panting) Whew...That was close

(Twilght hids and without warning,Pinkie pie jumps and pins Twilight to the ground)

Pinkie pie: HA! Gottcha,Whatcha gonna do now,Twilight?

(Twilight then gives Pinkie a kiss. The both of them blush)

Twilight: (Giggle) That?

(They both smile at each other and laughed with each other. A few hours later Twilight and Pinkie pie are sitting on the beach. Twilight is reading while Pinkie is looking at the beautiful sunset)

Pinkie pie: Aaaaah,the sunset looks so beautiful,doesnt it?

Twilight: Yeah,it does

Pinkie pie: Yeah....Oh look,a seashell

(Pinkie pie runs and goes for it. Twilight sees her running for it)

Twilight's mind: Oh Pinkie pie,your so random. Thats what I love about you. If I'm overstressed or just bored,your always there to lighten my day. Your laugh and smlie makes me happy every minute. I don't what I would do without you.

Twilight: My sexy pink cake

(As Twilight resumes from reading,Pinkie goes to her,grabs Twilights books,throws it assides and kisses her neck)

Pinkie pie: Mmmmmh

Twilight: Pinkie Pie ha ha ha,that tickles

Pinkie pie: I know it does. I love making you laugh all over.

(After kissing her neck,Pinkie rest her head on Twilight's chest)

Pinkie pie: Your so soft

Twilight: You too

(As they rest on each others embrace,They see an Amusement park on the boardwalk)

Pinkie pie: Hey look,an amusement park. Can we go? Can we? Can we? Can we?

Twilight: Yeah,cmon lets go    

(The mares are at the amusement park)

Pinkie pie: Wow,this amusement park has so much rides. Which one should we go on first?

Twilight: Uhhh,how bout the rollercoaster?

Pinkie pie: Yeah,now that sounds like fun

(The both of them goes on the rollercoaster and rides it)


(A few minutes later,they are off the rollercoaster)

Pinkie pie: Wow,that was fun

Twilight: Yeah,my hearts beating like crazy

Pinkie pie: So whats next?

Twilight: Hmmmm.....Spinning Tea cups?

Pinkie pie: Oh yeah,Lets get dizzy

(The mares goes on the tea cups and rides them. Getting dizzy with each turn)

Twilight and Pinkie pie: Ha ha ha ha WOAH ha ha ha ha ha WOAH

(A few minutes they get off of the tea cups. The both of them were dizzy)

Twilight: Woah,that was fun

Pinkie pie: I feel dizzy,Woaaaaaahhhh

(Twilight catches Pinkie before she falls down)

Pinkie pie: Thank you,Twilight. For a second there,I was about to fall

Twilight: But I catched you

(They both smile and laugh with each other. The both of them are now on the ferris wheel,which is going to the very top. Twilight and Pinkie pie  can see ponyville from atop view. It was amazing)

Pinkie pie: This day was oh so very fun

Twilight: Oh so very fun,Indeed. I'm glad I took a day off. I needed it

Pinkie pie: Yes you did. The whole tardiness thing was driving you crazy

Twilight: I know,I was in a very bad rut. I'm glad you were there bring me back up

Pinkie pie: Of course,ya silly. (She cuddles with Twilight) I'll always be there to help you up. Your my adorkable bookworm and I don't want anything happening to you. When your sad,I can't be happy

Twilight: Oh Pinkie pie (She puts her arms around her) Your the best marefriend I ever had.

Pinkie pie: So are you. I love you,Twilight

Twilight: I love you too,Pinkie pie

(As they look at the view,they see colorful fireworks lighten the beautiful night sky)

Pinkie pie: Look! Fireworks

Twilight: They look so beautiful

Pinkie pie: And romantic

(The two mares were mezmerize of how colorful and beautiful the fireworks were. Then as the look at each other,they kiss very soft and tender. In their mind,they wish that this romantic memory would last forever. A few hours into the night,they are back inside their tents)

Pinkie pie: (Yawn) I dont know about you,but I'm sleepy

Twilight: Heh heh heh,tired already,Pinkie?

Pinkie pie: Yeah,had way too much fun. Ready to hit the hay,what about you?

Twilight: I'm gonna read till I fall asleep

Pinkie pie: Wait! (She puts the blanket under her and Twilight,then she snuggles with her) Will you read to me?

Twilight: Sure thing,baby

(Twilight gets her book that she was reading from the entire trip)

Pinkie pie: I wanna get all warm and cozy before you start reading. Aaaaaah

Twilight: Ready? Where do I begin?   

(Twilight starts reading for Pinkie pie. Having someone to hold onto as they read comfort Pinkie. She could get bored,but for Twilight,she made an exception. She love hearing her voice and the softness of her warm chest. Then in a moment,Pinkie started to close her eyes very slowly and falls asleep. Twilight notices this and kisses her in the mane)

Twilight: Good night,sweetheart. I love you

(Twilight kept on reading,but this time to herself. The next morning,Twilight wakes up and sees the morning sky rising)

Twilight: Morning already?

(Twilight still sees Pinkie asleep on her chest. To Twilight,She loved it when Pinkie was sleeping. She looked beautiful)

Twilight: Few more minutes

(Twilight then went back to sleep. Twilight was glad to have Pinkie by her side. She had someone to laugh with,to have fun with,to make jokes with and to spend time with. Twilight loves Pinkie from the bottle of her heart,and no matter what,Twilight was never gonna leave her lovers side. Not even for some dumb scroll)

(The end)
Pinkie pie takes Twilight to the beach,hoping to help her relax and to have fun.

My TwiPie fic. Hope you all like it. Oh yeah :iconcommentplz: if thats okay


MLP: FIM owned by Lauren Faust :iconfyre-flye:
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CrazyExperiment Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
some spelling are incorrect but i must say im still impressed :D great work
Ironsightt Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ehhh, Old work is not my best work ever, so the spelling sucks lollipops, and this was made when I was still a novice xD But I'm glad you liked it overall. Thank you very much. ^^ Surprise I didn't put this in scraps, but whatever, I'll leave it as such xD
CrazyExperiment Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
lol XD
jaymiejordan Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
from the bottle of her heart nice typo I liked it
Ironsightt Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh heh, thank you ^^;
kxp71 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Student Digital Artist
awesome work yet again, i love your fanfics expecially this one because it's not cloppy
don't get me wrong i still love your clopfics but i just feel dirty after reading them (and i love it =p)
keep up the good work
Ironsightt Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I will and I know what you mean :D
StarCloud70 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Student Writer
This story is very lovely, Ironsigh!

Its going to my fav box!

So when is your next story going to be? (Sorry if I'm over doing it, I just get in such of a hurry at things)
Ironsightt Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you

I don't know yet but I think I wanna try my hand on a Octavia X Scratch fanfic. Right now I've been busy during this week.
zora-artist Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Student Digital Artist
aaa very lovely story as always Iron!
surprise me that this one dont had......hehe you know XD
but, theres no need of that for a beauty story =)
love it Iron!!
Ironsightt Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
zora-artist Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Student Digital Artist
=) he you know
thanks to you =)
Scropion-Blood Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
I love it very cute^^
Ironsightt Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
BrightGlow Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011
Great chapter again but I missed one thing from it, one thing which is connecting to the beach and this is the swimming. I wonder why they didn't go to swim. :confused: as I remember pinkie is good at swiming and snorkling or at least I could see a hint to that in the show.
Anyway I wonder if Pinkie Pie and Twilight Sparkle would wear swimsuit. I hope so since you wrote in your Arcadian story that the girls were shopping clothes. Sorry I just like the idea of ponies in swimsuit. Now I can't help but try to imagine what type and colored swimsuits would those two wear.
Ironsightt Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. The beach was too cold to go swim in since its fall. As for the swimsuit I imagined Twilight wearing a sparkling bathing suit with her cutie mark on the left side while Pinkie pie wears a pink Bathing suit with her cutie make on the right side.
BrightGlow Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
Oh I thought theye cwere ther in summer. Oh well at least they had fun.
EagleSpartan888 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
very nice! :icontwilightclapplz:
Ironsightt Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
EagleSpartan888 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome my friend! =D
lightbringer135181 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011
i thought the stuff in the amusement park could have been extended a little, but otherwise a really great job :3
Ironsightt Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
ElementsGuardian Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Not bad, tho i will say, your grammar could use some work, not to say that we are all perfect writers, we all have our mistakes, good job tho
Ironsightt Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you,I am trying my best to correct my mistakes with all of my stories
ElementsGuardian Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
hey no prob, just happy to help encourage my fellow bronies, you'll get it one day, i still got the gist of what you were sayin lol
PuffyDearlySmith Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist

What a great read this was, nicely done man:nod:
Ironsightt Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
BlackKittieZ Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
very good i love it!
Ironsightt Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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